Monday, January 18, 2010

Boy


Tender footsteps fall
On the porch outside his house;
The child looks around in wonder,
Taking everything in with a sweeping glance;
He respects what he sees
Yet feels a strange anonymity within him;
The voice that resounds within is not his own.
He feels estranged and stranded.
Not quite able to comprehend what to do next
Or how to take in this situation;

The child moves then to the garden,
Where he sees many plants,
And thorns under his feet
Which he learns to carefully avoid,
He wanders from tree to tree and shrub to shrub
Blissfully lost but in the search for something
When a voice calls him back home;
He turns around, and in a shrug
Forgets what he was searching for.

With a smile he comes back home
And notices there is something to eat on offer, on a plate.
He gobbles it readily and runs back into the garden
Leaving the plate behind;
He is quickly reprimanded for his mistake,
Of which he had no idea of committing and
Unwillingly, obeys and puts the plate back inside.

He does not understand why he was asked to do so,
He runs back out into the garden
And climbs a tree;
He sits on it and listens to the birds chirping and the sun
Shining through the canopy,
He makes patterns with his eyes
Askew and out of focus,
He tries different means to entertain himself.

He dreams of being a cricketer,
Of being the best in the world,
And showing everyone how skilled he is.
He takes a stick and swings it and traces the trajectory
Of a ball that has gone miles into the stands
With the commentator all in a flurry;

He returns home victorious, covered in mud,
Clothed in a vest and a Lungi;
He expects a hero’s welcome
And pretends to receive an obliging nod from his father;

He sleeps without a care in the world,
The dream still running amok in his mind
And a clock ticks, surely but surely
Towards a conclusion, which just as surely
Awaits him.

3 comments:

baanee said...

nostalgic...

Ridhima bahl said...

wow!!! beautiful image of things around and of the boy and the interaction and relation that develops between the two... :-)
hmm again dual vision.saw just a description of a playful day/s for the boy at micro level but at macro level one can see the growing stages of maturity and awareness..how one learns to differentiate between right and wrong and how one can identify things which can hurt..saw all this specially in the para ''The child moves then to the garden...He turns around, and in a shrug
Forgets what he was searching for'' i love these lines :-)
and also saw this duality between being a man in the way he thinks and acts and dreams like on one side and how he has the peace and accepting things around as a boy...
the last para ends the whole in a very peaceful way...
generally the image of the boy in vest and lungi playing,eating,smiling and all covered up in mud is cute..he he..
over all very nice work...nice representation of self or of any boy or any person...

Tosham said...

:)